Even The Female Robots Are Crazy

Greetings,

I know you would be surprised to read from someone relatively unknown to you. My name is Lt. Jane Bowe, a member of the U.S. ARMY USARPAC Medical
Team, which was deployed to Iraq at the beginning of the war in Iraq.

I would like to share some highly personal classified information about my personal experience and role which I played in the pursuit of my career serving
under the U.S 1st Armored which was at the fore-front of the war in Iraq.

Though, I would like to hold back certain information for security reasons for now until you have found the time to visit the BBC website stated below to
enable you have an insight into what I intend sharing with you, believing that it would be of your desired interest one-way or the other.
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Also, could you get back to me having visited the above website to enable us discuss in a more clarifying manner to the best of your understanding. I must
say that I'm very uncomfortable sending this message to you without knowing truly if you would misconstrue the importance and decides to go public. In this
regards, I will not hold back to say that the essence of this message is strictly for mutual benefit between you and I and nothing more.

I will be vivid and coherent in my next message in this regards, meanwhile, could you send me an email confirming that you have visited the site and that
you have understood my intentions? I will await your thoughts via my personal email.

Thanks,

Best Regards

Lt. Jane Bowe.

Greetings,

Introduction should come first => I know you would be surprised to read from someone relatively unknown to you. My name is Lt. Jane Bowe, a member of the U.S. ARMY USARPAC Medical Team, which was deployed to Iraq at the beginning of the war in Iraq. <= [USARPAC is short for "United States Army Pacific", and they operate in Japan and southeast Asia, not Iraq]

I would like to share some highly personal classified information about my personal <= [overuse of word] experience and role which I played in the pursuit of my career serving
under the U.S 1st Armored <= [US 1st Armored Division is part of USAREUR, not USARPAC] which was at the fore-front of the war in Iraq. <=[Technically, only the 3d Brigade was part of the initial invasion]

Though, I would like to hold back certain information for security reasons for now until you have found the time to visit the BBC website stated below to enable you have an insight into what I intend sharing with you, believing that it would be of your desired interest one-way or the other. <=[Overly wordy and confusing, simplify]

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Also, could you get back to me having visited the above website to enable us discuss in a more clarifying manner to the best of your understanding. <=[Questions must end with a question mark, run-on sentence] I must say that I'm very uncomfortable sending this message to you <=[Unnecessary assertion] without knowing truly if you would misconstrue the importance<=[Overly wordy] and decides<=[Grammatically incorrect] to go public. In this regards<=[Grammatically incorrect], I will not hold back<=[Confusing word choice] to say that the essence of this message is strictly for mutual benefit between you and I and nothing more.<=[Too vague. How does it benefit the recipient?]

I will be vivid and coherent<=[Strange/confusing adjective choice] in my next message in this regards<=[Grammatically incorrect], meanwhile, could you send me an email confirming that you have visited the site and that you have understood my intentions? I will await your thoughts [Unnecessary addendum]=>via my personal email.

Thanks,

Best Regards<=[Extraneous courtesy text]

Lt. Jane Bowe.<=[Unnecessary punctuation]



Greetings,

My name is Lt. Jane Bowe. I'm a member of the U.S. Army, 1st Armored Division, which was deployed to Iraq during the invasion in 2003. I know you're probably surprised to receive this letter from a complete stranger, but please let me explain. I am writing this because I would like to share some highly personal, classified information about my experience and the role I played during my career serving in the U.S 1st Armored Division.

However, I have decided to hold back certain information for security reasons [for now], until you have found the time to visit the website listed below. It will give you some insight into what I intend to share with you, and should pique your interest further in regards to the information I have to offer.

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After you visit the site, I think we'll both be on the same page, and we'll be able to discuss exactly what I have to offer in more concrete terms. I apologize for my lack of forthrightness, but I have to be sure you won't immediately go public with my information. To be clear, the purpose of this message is strictly for mutual benefit between you and I only, no one else.

Please reply to this email once you have read this message and followed the link I've supplied. It will allow me to be more clear in our following messages. I await your thoughts. Thank you for your time.

Best Regards,

Lt. Jane Bowe